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Today I wanna want to tell

Today I wanna want to tell you about my day. I usually get up at 6am. After I get up, the first thingsI do is are brush my teeth and wash my face. 

  • "Wanna" is very informal. It is more common to hear it while speaking than see it in writing. 
  • Because you list TWO things, you should say "the first things I do ARE..."

          The second thing I have to do is practice handstand and sit in meditation. 

  • You can say "practice my handstand" OR "practice handstands."

          Meditation can treat tuberculosis, chronic gastroptosis, ptosis, gallstones, and hypertension etc.

  • "etc." doesn't lend much to this sentence. You could say "and much more" instead.
  • Don't forget your commas when listing several items!

          Long-term adherence to the head and foot inverted regularly practicing handstands can bring three benefits to the human body: One is to  First, it improves the intelligence and response capabilities. Second, Two is delaying  it delays senility. Finally, Three is vertical and it prevents fatigue prevention and treats of various diseases caused by cerebrovascular disease, especially.

           After doing morning exercises, I comb my hair,, feed my dog and take her for a walk.  I stay at my company from 8 in the morning to 6::30 in the afternoon. 

           How many hours a day do you work?   Do you work far away from your home? 

           We have shuttle bus service in the morning and evening. It takes 40 minutes from my home to the office. There is no bus at noon, but if I want to go home, I have to take the bus home. The bus takes two minutes and 50 52 minutes, 1 hours and 40 minutes. Lunch break is 2.5 hours, minus 1 hours and 40 minutes. Cooking and eating time is only 50 minutes. Time is running out.

          After work  I  have no time to eat fruit, so I have to clean some fruits bring them to my office and for eating.  At  7:20am  I  leave  my  home, walk  to  the company  shuttle  bus stop  and  catch  the  bus  to  work..  On  the  bus  I  like to massage  my  hands. 

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