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2016.8.31 What is the story, and a story about the hippo and I  

2016-08-31 08:22:01|  分类: English 2016.8.2 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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What is the story?  
The story is time, space, characters, plot, start and end time. 
Space = place of the story.
Time of the story .
Characters      who and whom are in the story.
plot is the event = What is happening why, how and where is it developing to. 
Start and end.....how does the story beginnings and how does it finish. 
To tell a story we have to decide in what tense we tell it .  past tense or present tense.  He goes.... or he went....
Once upon the time.   Is it happening now?  We have to decide. 
5WH     These are the elements of the story.        5W=why, what, where, when, who  whom.      H=how

Today I know What are the sentences and stories. I have to correct the sentences  and stories I did yesterday.
1---The weather in October becomes cooler.
2---I am not sure if the last result ( outcome) is true or false, correct or wrong.
3---We are playing a game, but I am running out of time, I must do my best to win the championship( contest). 
4---You seem down today, tell me what's wrong, please.     I am sorry, I don't want to get involved in your trouble.
5---Don't lose your head if you face troubles at work,  I am sure you will over come your troubles soon.   or  I will try to help you out .

The Hippo and I
First we talk about what a Hippo is.
     The hippopotamus is a kind of amphibians,  It is a social animal and like being with others of its kind.  hippo loves water, which is why the Greeks named it the "river horse." He is afraid of cold, likes warm climate. He eats his food at night, mainly feed on aquatic plants, on land he eats grass.When he faces food shortage, alternatively he eats meat.The hippo is enormous and bulky, but when he walks in water, he seem to be light.Hippo though always stays in water, but he can't swim, he can only dive.
    There is a zoo near my home. There is a hippo in it. I often go to see it.  The zoo is just a walking distance from home. I like that hippo very much, I think of him and I think that he thinks of me, too. As it is Sunday today andsunny beautiful day. I went to the zoo to see him as usual, I took some food  with me,  lettuce. cabbages, bananas, apples and some other vegies. He ate them all up. When l leave the zoo, he followed me all the way to my house, he entered our garden and went to the pool, I watched while I was sang a song and he danced as cool as a rabbit. 
    In the evening, when I went to bed,  he started jumping and bouncing, he wanted to get into (onto)my bed, but because he's  bulky, I didn't allow him to do so, I might have upset him.  My mom told him to go to his home in the zoo, but he insisted to go back with some food, so I brought him some food and showed him the way back to the zoo. I had fun that day and I felt very happy. 
    
 
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